The Swim of Things





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04/06/2009 - 23:01


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This is a classic Rom/Com staring the Evangelion cast. It has just about everything you would expect, and probably read before, but is my latest personal take on the genre. Hope you enjoy it.

  1. It was early in the school year and Shinji was sitting on the bleachers high above the pool. He was in his usual place, top of the bleachers right in the middle. Added to his appearance was a pair of sunglasses that he wore to shade his eyes from the bright pool lights and a pair of earphones plugged into his ears. He sat there with his head slightly tilted downwards almost like he was looking at something below.

  2. "Do you think she will be so pissed she won't come to school today?" Touji asked.

    "No such luck" Hikari answered him. "If she misses class she can't practice."

    Kensuke added "I bet she gets into a fight today."

    "As long as it has nothing to do with me, I don't care." Touji told him.

  3. It was 9:00am on Saturday morning. Asuka stood beside Rei's bed and was poking her in the shoulder. "Up and at' ems Blue."

    Rei answered with what could at best be described as mumbling in her sleep. "Go away you red headed demon."

    "Oh c'mon Rei. You can do better than that." Asuka said. "I get called much worse than a demon on a daily basis."

  4. On Monday Misato showed up at practice with Keiko in tow. She wanted to see how things were going and also make sure Asuka wasn't pushing anyone too hard. Truthfully she was more worried about Asuka pushing herself than the others. Asuka was now the team captain and that meant she expected the most out of herself. If the team won then she did her job. If the team lost that meant she had failed them. That kind of attitude was something that still upset Misato. Asuka had the problem of being her own worst enemy along with now putting the weight

  5. It was a month after that quiet night at dinner and things were going pretty well. Asuka's promise to the coach had come true and Rei was now the number three swimmer on the team. Mana though was still on the team as most of the other members on the team couldn't beat her times on a consistent basis or the few that could turned down the offer. Shinji was still the much used and abused manager of the swim team but he didn't mind the torture too much. After spending most of his life by himself being surrounded by a bunch of girls was a welcoming

  6. Hikari showed up at Rei's place for the slumber party at around 7:00pm. When she entered she noticed only Rei was there and she was sitting in her special chair reading a book. "So where is Asuka?"

    "She is still at her place. Shinji should be done with her in a short while." Rei answered.

    "Uh oh" Hikari said "I think I may have made a mistake then. Touji is going to stay over at Shinji's tonight and I already sent him over there."

  7. That night Asuka pretty much complained all through dinner. She wanted her party but no one was cooperating with her. She even tried to hit up Rei again during dinner but got the same answer as before as Rei wasn't even planning on going to the party let alone hosting it. This time though Asuka had to listen to the no as when she tried to press Rei Misato told her to knock it off. The raised eyebrows of her parent meant she was serious so Asuka backed off. Of course that meant she went after Kensuke next for telling her no.

  8. It was the morning after her party and Asuka woke up feeling especially good. The birds were singing, the pleasantly warm sun was shining brightly through her window, and the memories of last night were still fresh in her head. And last night was a very good night indeed. She let out a little moan of contentment as she remarked "God I can't believe he even tasted good.

    "That's certainly nice to know.

  9. It was the last day before winter break and all the teens in the classroom were in the exact same position, their heads down staring at pieces of papers in front of them. This wasn't a good thing at all either as the papers in front of them were filled with all sorts of questions designed to test just how much knowledge they had accumulated in the first of the three trimesters of school. When I said all of them I meant all of them as even Asuka had to do this. She had tests too. The only good thing about having to go through

  10. It was a rather chilly day in the middle of January and Rei was just plain miserable. While the fact it was below freezing and there was snow on the ground made the outside condition seem desolate and bleak to her that is not why she was miserable. Not even the super thick study books that were sprawled out in front of her on her desk were even that bad. She had finally moved passed all the feelings that had to do with her advance situation and just accepted it now, at least what she was doing wasn't as hard as Asuka. But what was making her

  11. It was March 20th, the first day of spring in Japan. And it was also the designated day of remembrance. On this day just about everything closed down for the festivities as the first day of spring was one of the few things around the world that symbolized the same thing, rebirth. A very fitting idea and a good way to spin the whole third impact thing into something positive. The actual day of third impact itself was left to the individual as most people would rather not remember it. It was not a good day in the least and for most it was a

  12. Shinji and Asuka were cuddled together in her bed on a Sunday night. It was the end of spring break and in the morning they would have to go to school once again. This also meant something else, if Shinji wanted to play baseball this year he would have to try out tomorrow. With the final winter sports tournaments and playoffs having already occurred that meant the winter season was over and spring sports teams were starting up.

  13. It was near the end of April and there were some definite changes going on in certain people's lives. For one Shinji and Asuka spent much more of their free time locked away in her room doing things to each other that felt incredibly good. Of course that only got to happen after Shinji was punished for running out with Kaji instead of paying attention to her on that one day when he first joined the ball team. The punishment was designed to be strict and harsh so it would teach him a lesson. And when Shinji finally got home that night Asuka

  14. "Hello. This is Yoshi Sato

    "And this is Ryo Suzuki coming to you live from Tokyo-4 high school. Boy do we have a match up for you folks today! (A/N: Since announcers cut in and out on each other a lot I will differentiate between the two by using YS and RS respectively in their speaking. That way I am not writing "he said every single time they throw in a word.)

    (YS) "You can say that again. Both these teams are at the top of the standings in their division. It's still early in the season but this should be a pivotal game.

  15. Today was the first week in June at Tokyo-4 high. Monday, June third to be precise. But while the start of June meant this was the last month of school before getting off for summer break none of the teenagers belonging to the second year class at the high school were all that happy. The first full week in June was the start of a one week event that no one liked. It coincided with the more advanced version of sex education that they had been learning in health class. Basically this was the follow up lesson on the results of sex. And as each second

  16. It was the Saturday before finals week in June, in the evening to be precise. Misato was sort of pacing outside the door to Asuka's room. She had something she wanted to discuss with the two but she really didn't want to interrupt them. It was Saturday and they were young lovers so she could easily guess and agree with why the door was closed. It was only natural after all. Its just that the two had never come out of that room for more than a couple seconds today and what she had to talk to them about was sort of important. She had

  17. On Sunday Rei said goodbye to Misato and the others as she saw them off from the airport. She was definitely going to miss them all and she did want to go with but the opportunity just wasn't right at this time. Misato did say she was going to make it up to the girl though as next winter she was planning on setting up another vacation as well. She promised Rei that it would be someplace tropical and warm. Rei had to smile at that, Misato really did know her well.

  18. Li Mei had wanted to thank Kensuke for helping her out but by the time she got out into the hall all she saw was Kensuke let go of Rei and tell her to have a good night, then he was off. Normally she would have just yelled down the hall but her attention was drawn to Rei. The girl looked liked she was completely lost. "Is everything all right?

  19. The plane landing was sort of bumpy but not all that bad actually. Both Misato and Kaji had been on flights that were much worse. And after it was all over the pilot came on the intercom and thanked everyone for flying Japanese Airline's nonstop flight from Tokyo-4 to Berlin. He also told everyone that it was now 9:00 am and a beautiful day outside. Highs would be in the eighties and it would stay mostly sunny. That was the funny thing about flying long distances, depending on which way you flew you could either gain or lose a whole

  20. Asuka spent a good hour down in the basement basically crying. Crying over the loss of her mother, crying over everything that happened, crying over forgetting all the good times she shared with her mother, crying over how happy she was to have her mother back in her heart, and crying over being able to see these pictures again. Basically she was having just a good old fashion cry.

  21. It was early in the morning when Hikari's little sister, Nozomi, was walking down the street with a note in her hand. She was looking for a particular address while thinking to herself `You owe me big time for this sis.' She had gone to the dance the night before too and didn't get home till late. Too late in fact thanks to her worthless ex-boyfriend. But her father showed some compassion for her problems and instead of a lecture she got a note by Touji handed to her. She also got a “This would be a nice thing to do for your sister” comments from her dad as well.

  22. The Tokyo 4's high school girl's swim team's end of the season pool party was a bigger bash than usual this year as they had much to celebrate. For the first time in the young school's history the team went undefeated throughout the season. A very fine accomplishment that everyone celebrated in grand style. Even the coach was extra joyous as not only was this her first undefeated season as this school's head coach but the first one in her entire history of coaching.

  23. Mrs. Amano was standing in front of her class at the start of a new school week. She had all her students quiet down and take their seats as she had an announcement to make. “I know it's unusual for this time of the year but we have a new student in our class.” She then opened the door to her room and the girl who was waiting outside entered. “Everyone, I would like to introduce you to Mai Siratori. Please make her feel welcomed.” That last part was just politeness in action as she had no doubts about this girl fitting in with her class.

  24. With Kensuke's and Rei's relationship just released from the bag it was naturally the hot topic among Mrs. Amano's class. As for Rei and Kensuke, they were gone and unable to answer any questions. But it wasn't like they ran away or anything, they simply did what was already planned for today. Hikari thought it might be nice to ski out to one of the cabins and study out there. Studying at the lodge was proving difficult as no one really wanted to so that meant every study session turned into a horsing around or gossip session.

  25. Shinji and Kaji were sitting on the couch watching a ball game with Asuka sitting next to Shinji reading a book while Misato was trying to get Keiko to eat something for lunch before she put her little girl down for a nap. Those activities were interrupted by a knock at the door. Misato was obviously too busy to answer it so Asuka went to check. But not without her grumbling under her breath as the two boys didn't even seem to register that there was a knock, they were too busy watching the Tigers get their asses kicked.

  26. Asuka walked into the classroom on the first day after the end of the winter break with a beautiful golden tan. Her body looked like it was in the height of the summer instead of the dead of winter. This of course caught the attention of the other girls in the classroom. You didn't get a tan like that hanging around Tokyo 4. “Where'd you go?”

    “Just to one of the southern islands” Asuka answered. But it wasn't in an egotistical way or anything. More that anything she was understating herself. She wanted the girls to think differently from the real truth.

  27. It was after school and Kensuke was sitting at his computer typing away. But he wasn't doing his school work, instead he was tallying up the final points for the fantasy baseball league his friends and him were in. He let out a sigh as the inevitable happened, his star pitcher killed him. Not only did he lose first place to Touji but when his pitcher turned up lame for a second game that meant he lost out on second place too. He ended up in third place, and dangerously close to tying with Shinji for that spot too as he only held a one point lead.

  28. It was February 14th and the high school was all in a twitter. There was a ton of candy being passed around and just as much gossip. What with all the talk about who was giving out honmei-choco and giri-choco to whom and whether it was the kind they said it was how could there not be juicy gossip? Were some girls giving more personal chocolates to boys they should be only giving the friendly type? Were some boys misinterpreting what kind of chocolates they were getting? Were some boys getting honmei-choco from more than one girl? It was all so scandalous among the gossipy teens.

  29. It was the very end of March and the week of the sports fest. This was the perfect time for it as it was right after the short day of remembrance break and between the end of the winter sports and the beginning of the spring sports. That meant all the students would be rested and able to participate in the setup and the festival itself, whether they wanted to or not.

  30. During the whole ride home from the sports festival Asuka was running her sexy little fingers up and down Shinji’s arm and enticing him with looks of arousal. She wanted something and she wanted it bad. As you can guess this act of seduction worked perfectly and immediately when they got home the two skedaddled off to have some fun in Asuka’s room. And with the new rules limiting the number of activities they could participate in that meant they had plenty of energy to burn.

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